All Comments on 'A Brother and "Buncle" Arrive'

Sorry. This was horrible. Wrong category also

There was no incest in this story. Neither of the women had sex with each other and Wilson was not related to either woman. Put this in the erotic couplings.

Not to pick on the mentally retarded but how hard is it to categorise stories correctly?

If this were categorized correctly, I would still give it 1 star, but I wouldn't be wishing I could give it a lower score.

A male trying to write from the female perspective is difficult when the male author hasn't the talent. Within the first paragraph, I was disgusted with this. Please, if you must continue writing. Stick to the male perspective. At least until your mature more as a writer. Ultimate suggestion, seeing as how this was in the wrong category; don't write anymore.