All Comments on 'A Brother & Sister Ch. 01-06'

Keep writing this story, it is never ending and so damned horny. It is tight, well written and eplorative. Well done.

If you should get the opportunity check out my work, would love your vote too.

Totally awesome. If one could only have an opportunity to participate in such an event. My compliments to the writer, excellent, and hoping some of this is not just your imagination. Keep up the good work.

You write the sort of story that reaches out through your monitor and grabs you by the balls. Exquisite.It's rare for me to give 5's but you earned it. Thanks for the story Nikki. I'm going to add you to my favourites page.

My my what a long list of sweet young cum sluts we have here. And we have a few NOT so young as well. Throw in a liberal dose of monster cocks, and you have a recipe for all out gorilla fucking. Hell fire, we even have a good share of girl on girl action as well! What with all the young entreprenurial action going as well...whew...this old man needs to stop and catch his breath here...And Mom and auntie...aren't they just precious...LOL...thinking they can get a little of Stevie boys mega-cock ANONYMOUSLY? And little Julie...Christ she just wants to fuck somethin'. And wouldn't you fucking know that some poor dolt named DAVE would have the only moral compass in town? Huh...at least until his daughter destroyed ALL of his resolve to NOT succumb to her charms. Poor fucker NEVER had a chance. What? You say the story ain't over yet? I know I've asked this before but...WHERE THE HELL IS MY NITRO? Nikki...your bio says it best...you ARE a hot (and nasty) little girl!

This is the third time I have read the story. It keeps me HARD through every page and I cannot wait to get to the next scene. I think Nikki is one of the best writers on Literotica.

Erotic and well written, it teases the reader and leaves you wanting more.

Congratulation for your creativity. Your story is undoubtedly the best I have read at this website. There is a very good development of the relationship among the characters, one can note the beginning and the middle. I am just waiting for the end...

Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

all i can say is wow

Best story I've read in a long time. Please post more.

I've been reading this story off and on for the past 6 months or so (a couple paragraphs here and there when I have the chance), and I have to say that this is an awesome story. I've often dreamed of having sexual encounters with family members, and have even fooled around with my own sister. Thanks for a great read! MD

I have read many erotica stories and this is the best fucking story yet.

Awesome can't wait to read more.....

All i got to say is that its the best incest story i ever read and ive read a lot. i love how you dont just keep it bro/sis or mom/son but all of the family and some w/o knowing who each other are. also i love how you dont go into details of how many inches the cock is. when i read this i keep masturbating constantly, i couldnt get enough of it. i hop eyou follow it up with more, because it the best fucking story i read...ever! keep it cumming! <3

All i got to say is that its the best incest story i ever read and ive read a lot. i love how you dont just keep it bro/sis or mom/son but all of the family and some w/o knowing who each other are. also i love how you dont go into details of how many inches the cock is. when i read this i keep masturbating constantly, i couldnt get enough of it. i hop eyou follow it up with more, because it the best fucking story i read...ever! keep it cumming! <3

Absolutely fabulous!

Reading your story hase made me wondering a bit about my 17 y.o. daughter (and 18 y.o. son). Would they also....?

My daughter loves fucking her friend. I know, I've heard her scream one night...

Please continue. You still have a long way to go to get all possible combinations of this family. So you'll have to end in with absolute stunning groupsexparty.

Please get Julie on the pill a.s.a.p. and let all men fill this greedy slut's ass and cunt with their sperm.

Another wish: also some sex between men. I know many men secretly think about that. Or not so secretly. I for one have a couple of times sucked a friends dick till he came in my mouth. I loved the taste and smell of dick and the feelimg of cum spurting into my mouth!

Not shocked are you?

The hottest story I have ever read. Hot action, great build up, and so well written.

This is without doubt the best story I have ever read on this topic.It is well crafted and scripted, the story line develops at a carefully-slow pace, and the breadth of its content is awesome. It must have taken a month of creative effort to write it all, and you should be congratulated for sticking with it to the end (if this is the end? -- might ther be a "final chapter still unwritten?) Thank you.

i've read this story and it's just fucking awesome, man i couldn't stop reading it for hours, all the weekend, man this is the best story i've read so far, i masturbated a lot of times reading today i spent all day in it

this was absolutely fantastic i have come several times reading this.....please please please you have to continue the story, i'm going to be so horny for the rest of the day now my panties are soaking wet.i just love talking horny sex online with someone it is such a turn on.

this was absolutely fantastic i have come several times reading this.....please please please you have to continue the story, i'm going to be so horny for the rest of the day now my panties are soaking wet.i just love talking horny sex online with someone it is such a turn on.

heheheheeh just seen david48 from texas's response to this story what a hoot, you have the right idea there hun.

HOT!!! PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME WAITING!!! I NEED MORE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

It took me days to read all the way but I came at least 40 times while reading it!! It was incredible!!

you are the Shakespeare of erotic literature my friend.

You are my inspiration Nikki. I love all your incest stories, but this one is a fucking epic! Keep them coming.

I loved how you had such a variety on the aspects of sex. You could work on a little though.

Nikki, your wtiting is so hot I am actually dizzy from readingit. Keep up this terrific storyRjay.

I thought this was an incredible story, I have already read 1-10 once, and im reading it again now. I would love to hear some side stories maybe!! :D Once again, Awesome!!!

fucking awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

not only did i love the story but your writing is so amazing u should write erotic novles and see if you can get them published cuz i would pay to read material of this exlience. Unbaliebably well written, i had the biggest oragasm ive ever had reading this story, thank you so much....... =)

This is a great, er, novel (I guess it can be called that) lol. Had me cumming a few times, maybe you should take it futher, write more like erotic fiction and puslish it?

Peace

Daddy Cool.

I wish you were my niece, or daughter, or my sister, or my fuck buddy. That was really good writing and story line. Keep up the great work, and I'll keep reading. You had me hard and "wanking" quite a bit while reading your story. Thank You!

Nikki that story was so hot, i kept imagining I was steve, I was stroking my dick reading every hot word. I don't know how many times I came, yummy

It is a very long time since I have read a story like that - I jhave spent a whole afternoon reading it and have had more than a few masturbations whilst doing so - unfortunately I didnt have a male around to help me out - but I will next time I read it - and I will read it again

Amazing

OMG LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH I WISH I WAS A GUY NOW AND WANK MYSELF!!!! THIS STORY MADE ME SO HORNEY!! I JUST DIDNT LIKE THE ENDING IT WAS KINDA LAME SRRY BUT SOME PARTS OF THE STORY I JUST WANTED TO SCREEM OUT LOUD FROM MY ORGASIIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-P

KYLA

I've never read anything like this- My cock was so hard while reading, I just had to go and take care of it, thinking about Steve pounding his Mothers ass, and fucking Julie's mouth.

Please don't leave this line alone- keep writing!

Wow! So much material to jack off to. My cock is hard and I'm stroking it as I write with my left hand. You really gave me a great hardon. I've downloaded this to my favorites so I can masturbate to it again and again. It feels so good. Thanks. You are wonderful.

I liked almost everything about the story. I simply can't remember reading such an interesting story, much less one which was so well written.

My only worry is .... it hasn't REALLY ended .... has it ? There IS more to come ?

I am so hoping to read what happens when Mum finally admits etc.

It's a truly legendary piece of erotica.

PS: I think I fell in lust with the authoress somewhere along the way as well :-)

It has taken me a few hours to read through this story - WOW - I think the only thing that would have improved it would have been to make each incident a separate chapter - instead of just ongoing - otherwise a really great tale - keep writing -

Loved the girls sucking Steve's cock when he pulled out before putting it back in to fuck some more or to switch to the other, taking his cum in their mouth (and kissing to share it!), eating his cum from the other's pussy, as well as all the kissing to taste pussy on each other's lips. Just all the FFM bits. Keep writing -- your stories are the best I've EVER read!

this is one the best story's i have read in a long time. this was definatly a turn on

I just hope the story ísn´t finished. As far as I´m concerned, it can go on for at least another hundred chapters. I hope I don´t have to wait long for the next series of chapters, Thanks, this was awsom.

Just literally creative & imaginative,awesome storyline n don't forget very sexyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!

This is incredible, had me cumming twice already... One of the best written stories I've come across on here.

Thank you. Very, very good.

WOW what a story,continue please.

ONLY break it up

Keep Going with the story until the whole family is involved in a gang bang +.

Read it last year for the first time. Still as sexually exciting as the first time and I have mastabated quite a few times as I read it, it is that erotic. Let's eventually have the whole family in a family gang bang.

I loved this story it took a a few days to read the whole thing and i got wet every time i read it. I wish i had a brother like that.

absolutely amazing no parallel

omg that could not have been written any better. would love to read new chapters in this series. u could have so many more chapters. please keep writing on this series :-)

Will give you 100 after u satiate me with the rest

what happened between julie and gavin

Very Nice story Nikki. Loved every bit of it.

WOW!!!!! What a story!!! Normally, I give 4's, because the author(s) inevitably leave something out, but you get a BIG 5, because you didn't! You covered it all! Truly erotic literature at its finest! It took me 2 days to read chapters 1 - 6, because I read them slowly to be sure I didn't miss a single word! Can't wait to read the rest! (Hell, I would've given you a 6 if I could!)

omg i loved that it took me 10 hrs to read all that but it sure was good i came like 20 times all together cant wait to read the rest

I seriously came like six times over two days reading this story. Thank you, Nikki, I owe you one, or six I guess ;)

This is number one by anyones imagination loved every word of it especially the anal with olivia and Mary involved it can becum better and so will I cum!!!

This story should be the script of series of erotic movies. Why can't they take the cue of developing stories, characters, and truly erotic, taboo, suspenseful encounters?

Wow. Simply. Wow. That has got to be the best erotic story I have ever read. I notice from your profile that the adventure continues. I have to wonder if by the end, will we end up with a giant orgy between the two families? Can't wait to find out. :)

OMG that was the best i have ever read lol

U the best. It is the best erotics story I've ever read.

It's truly one of a kind. Thank you for your time.

i didn't count how often i came while reading this story. but now i have to go on and read pt 7-10

Incredible writing, I can't imagine how much fun you must have had writing this, but I know I probably loved reading it as much as you did writing it.

This story is really great ! I've always wanted to fuck one of my sisters..They are both beatiful and sexy..I may get the opportunity soon..Wish me luck..P.S Would like to fuck you too.

this is one of the best incest stories i have ever read on this site. there was a slight mistake in a paragraph on page five but you can easily remedy that. keep writing stories of this calibre nikki and you cant go wrong. maybe add a bit of incest marriage or pregnancies to spice it up a bit where brother gets sister pregnant then after the baby is born the brother drinks the sisters milk. that adds a bit more to the story and in my opinion drags it out a bit more to keep the readers interested. regardless of what i say about story ideas, my overall view is that your stories are great and i hope you keep writing more incest please!!!!

wow. i cant say much to that except DAMN!! i loved it! it got me so hard. i got off several times reading it. i always wanted to fuck my sis. shes just so damn hot. i get jealous every time she gets a boyfriend. we licked and sucked when we were younger but that quickly ended when she got her first boy ;) loved it. keep writing forever!!!!!

This is the first story I've ever read on this website (a few months ago, wasn't much for leaving comments then) and I loved it so much I read it again. Although the storyline is only good, the sex scenes are amazing. Thank you for writing this and getting me that much more interested in this website.

YOU HAVE TO FINISH, we all know where it is going but you have to finish, dont leave it to our imagination!

these stories are both erotic and sensational! Don't stop with it!

FINISHHHHH

WOW

This story it so hot and sexy, its hard to get so invested into the plotline and have it just end like this, please finish the story a.s.a.p. I would love to see what happens next and I imagine your other readers are dying to know as well.

God even if you didn't give specific measurements all you did was describe it as huge and massive god that gets so old.

Anyone who can write something like this must be as horny and nasty as I am. I have three older sisters, but the youngest one (six years older than me), I've wanted to fuck her for years. Hopefully someday I will get the chance. In the mean time I'll read your stories and jerk off, thinking about fucking my sister, and fucking you. Thanks.

Wow, this has been good. can't wait to read the rest!

Probably the best I ever had in my life. It was her idea and we'd screw like rabbits

It real like with the brother temptation his sister to the father guilty mind it so real and unblieveable to have both cases in the same family.

I do not know if your real name is nikki but you are one of the most talented reader i have read(I read other stuff then just erotic)

Samslam recommended you to me and I must say, he did not disappoint!!!! Very well written and extreamly erotic!!!! You deffinetly get five stars out of me!!

you have no idea how many times i have came reading this. it makes me feel so fucking hot. nikki - you are amazing!

Exceptionally well written thank you nikki you are great! This is quite the wild ride, most of this especially the parts of siblings is very plausible. I love the fact not every one is as easy as Julie and Steve. Very strange that after sleeping with her brother for a few months it finally occurs to her to go on the pill lol. I'd have busted a nut in her while carving her out by mistake eventually. Keep it up your the bomb nikki

it was almost like my family except i cant seduce any lol

Just an amazing story very well written and crazy hot. Lol its stoies like this that make me wish I had siblings.

Well written story from a very creative person. I wait to see if you are going to continue as there are many story lines open such as glory hole and some other with cousins.Keep up the great work.

Hope there will be more and more!

i have been a `fan` of porn for nearly twenty years but this story was the incredible! absolutely amazing!

this has to be the best thing i've read on here in my 3 weeks of exploring this site, great job nikki!

By far the best thing I've read on here. It's propably the longest as well, but it is very well written, with 23 pages of incestuous love. Keep up the good work and the great story, nikki :)

have read lot of stories but this one is like i can read many times without geting bored.

great job nikki.

way to long and it is never good to get the parents involved big zero from me

I will miss the reading of these adventures you are so hot. I had to stop and rub one out thinking of you. Want to adopt me ??? :-)

The climax will be when I read about mom learning she he knew it was her and Julie learning etc. May you have alread I will look for it.

Bless you Nikki

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very good but u should have divided iot into 6 different entries instead of one long entry

great story kept me hard the entie time

i was disappointed to find no more after 13

great story,wish my sisters and cousins and aunts and uncles were like Julie. is there more to cum.

thanks

WOW Love ur it I have read many times makes want to write some of my Fansties and some real stuff. So keep it it cumming

You're story made me cum 6 times in one night as the story unfolded. Made my pussy wetter than it has ever been. Thank you! And by the way, please continue it!

I'd love to see a real movie made of this, of course it would get banned but it would be a torrent legend!!!

This is amazing work! Keep it up!

This is amazing work! You should write your own novels but we'd miss you here.