A Bully Caged Pt. 03

Awesome story!

I wish I was Wes!

Great story, well written and very hot. Hope to get more.

I'm really exited to see what Ms. Simmons has planed. And if her friend is a woman a man.

Also can't wait for David to get more confident in his dominance, the last interaction with Wes already gave us a taste of his dominant side. I think if he becomes more confident Wes will be in for some really intense fun :)

the lace thong panties on Wes was hot. I hope David makes him wear slutty thigh highs, garters, and frilly lace panties all the time. Also like the small penis humiliation (sph) of hot stud Wes. I hope there's more of that. A better description of the ex jock stud Wes would be good too. that way we can picture him and his humiliation as we read the story

I'm really loving this story more and more with each chapter. This is everything a Dom/sub story should be without going to extremes with either roll. One thing though, I think I would have gone for a pink lace thong. That would have added to Wes' humiliation a little bit more. Can't wait to see who Ms. Simmons' friend is and find out what's going to happen when the three of them begin to train Wes together. MLF

I'm really enjoying the interplay between David's desire to dominate and his insecurity about it.

I am very excited to see where this story goes, as it's grown to maybe my all time favorite erotica in just 3 chapters. It's well written grammatically, well written thematically and is one of the few M4M stories I've read featuring this sort of dynamic. Over the past week I've come back maybe 4 times to check if there is a new chapter, and I am was very when doing so today. The only criticism I would levy is David being a bit on the crueler side, and while I understand the reason he acts that way, I would personally like for him and Wes to end up in a more wholesome relationship, like Wes becoming David's pet rather than abuse victim. Maybe when they sleep together, David sees the already asleep Wes and thinks he is cute, gives him a pat on the head, ect. That's just a suggestion though, not like I wouldn't continue reading without it :3

The story has got to be one of my favorite erotica texts I've ever read. It combines so many great elements, a bisexual protagonist who wants to experience his fantasies, the wish fulfilment of putting a bully in their place, chastity being used to control others, the dom being somewhat reluctant, and most special of all, the relationship is M4M, unlike 99.9% of stories with a male as the submissive. The fact it's gay and the gay element isn't used exclusively as a torment against the sub is very rare and probably my favorite aspect. Now I do have some light criticism, I personally don't like the depiction of

omg this story is fire! I love it! As a sub I really want to experience more of Wes's perspective but other than that... please keep writing, its a fantastic story! Made my cage feel small and tight :)