All Comments on 'A Business Trip to Remember'

by DesperateSteve

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good premise.

Too rushed. Sex too mechanical.

When she raised her skirt to show him her thong, needed dialog and teasing long before actual sex.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good premise.

But sex starts much too abruptly.

Needed some extended teasing. And foreplay. And perhaps reluctance that needed to be overcome.

Three stars.

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