All Comments on 'A Butterscotch Sky Ch. 02'

Now, included with the scienc-y science fiction, we have global political intrigue? Awesome! I'm a little confused as to the main character's reticence to marriage... but, o.k. Well done! 5 🌟!

THANK YOU.

We all get so invested in your characters, so thank you for a quite satisfactory cliffhanger resolution. Now to endure the wait for the next part. There will be a next part, right?

As a fan, I am sad that I can only give you 5 stars.

Good story!

5

I was about three paragraphs into the first chapter when I realised that I had made a grave mistake.

Now here I am at the end of chapter two and I'm condemned into the purgatory that is waiting for the next chapter.

And you two a**holes had to both end this chapter on a cliffhanger and make it the best thing I think you've ever written by far!

I'm not sure I like you anymore...

great story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Love the Cliffhanger. Great stuff.

Another cliffhanger ending. 5 stars.

This isn't a category I usually look at but stumbling over this story is a treat. The two of you produce amazing stories. I'm enjoying this one and want to thank you.

So it’s a mash up whodunnits, spy thrillers, and sci-fi. Damn fine too if can say so!

LL&P WillDevo. Ppfzz

Still enjoying it, Appreciated properly this time 5*