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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

The story is fast paced and captivating. Before you post. Try to read the story out loud to yourself. It may help you to fix the obvious typing and even word order errors. This would raise my score.

papa1603papa16038 months ago

Great story, I hope you continue it.

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Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...

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