by crazyhotsexpot
Since people are (hopefully) liking this, I'm considering doing another part!
Please do at least another chapter...I can envision many more. :-)
Good story. You kept switching from present to past tense which made it hard to read at some points. Caught a couple spelling problems (but as you said, there's always one or two that get missed), but overall very nice.
Loved this so far. Hope for more in the same vein, if not a continustion.
It's so rare for me to find an erotica with jokes that just intensify arosal. Usually jokes pull me out, but yours between angels and demons and subtle hints to what they're like in the human world, just made my upper lips giggle and my lower lips swirm. Yet the drama was so good too when you realize how tradgic this is for the angel. I hope she can regain a new happiness by fully embracing the sweet darkness of hell.
Is this real did this stuff with a angel and a demon really happen please reply
I have no idea if this is completed or not, but I think it deserves a sequel, or maybe even a full series. I would love to read more about Damien and Anna.