All Comments on 'A Captured Angel'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I have no idea if this is completed or not, but I think it deserves a sequel, or maybe even a full series. I would love to read more about Damien and Anna.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This is so good, I really hope your going to update

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
is this really did this stuff with a angel and demon really happen

Is this real did this stuff with a angel and a demon really happen please reply

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More!

Please more of this!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
So funny and sad, and hot. Please make more!

It's so rare for me to find an erotica with jokes that just intensify arosal. Usually jokes pull me out, but yours between angels and demons and subtle hints to what they're like in the human world, just made my upper lips giggle and my lower lips swirm. Yet the drama was so good too when you realize how tradgic this is for the angel. I hope she can regain a new happiness by fully embracing the sweet darkness of hell.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
it really does deserve a sequel

Loved this so far. Hope for more in the same vein, if not a continustion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Will you make a sequel?

evillizaevillizaabout 11 years ago
Nice

Good story. You kept switching from present to past tense which made it hard to read at some points. Caught a couple spelling problems (but as you said, there's always one or two that get missed), but overall very nice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

yummmm please do more with this. this was super hot.

guest6guest6about 11 years ago
Five stars!

Just great. Thanks.

Fluffy07Fluffy07about 11 years ago
*****

that was awesome! you should definitely do a part 2 :)

NotabanymoreNotabanymoreabout 11 years ago
That was

Amazing, I rarely find a 5 star story. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Definitely, more

Please do at least another chapter...I can envision many more. :-)

LeoLingLeoLingabout 11 years ago
Good

Another would be wonderful

crazyhotsexpotcrazyhotsexpotabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thnking of doing a part 2

Since people are (hopefully) liking this, I'm considering doing another part!

SweetGaspsSweetGaspsabout 11 years ago
Please please please

Continue this story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
very good

more please :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

will there be a sequel to this?

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