All Comments on 'A Case of Revenge Ch. 05'

It was short but great as always! I thought it was Melina when Don narrowed down that the shot had to come from the direction of the gym and it was only Todd and Melina at the gym. I also had it solidified when she was established as a crack shot. Thanks for this chapter. I can't wait to see what your version of shit hitting the fan is.

I've had a number of people send private messages about the Oldeeds killer, and some were right, and for the right reasons. There's one more chapter to this series, and it'll lead into the next series, which is "the biggie"...

I've long suspected it was Melina, ever since Don went to her gym after the murder. And all those trips she and Laura took just confirmed it for me. The real shocker for me was him finally getting to have a threesome with Melina, and taking her bareback, two things she never wanted to do with him during their marriage.

-Myers

I have to correct my last comment. It has been a while since I read the first few parts of the series, and I forgot that Melina did have occasional threesomes with Don and Laura when she was still married to him.

-Myers

like this whole story line. don't need the sex but love the intrigue..

Well, that was a bit of an eye opener. Knew Melina was a crack shot but never really thought she was the shooter, my money was on Laura as she was also at all the locations.

You certainly keep them coming. 5⛤

I had it right. I didn’t get the sister/sister relationship which was a shock. However you have not explained why Melina and the condoms on Don but not others. Hope in future that tidbit will be explained. Great story!!

*****Wow a lot of things are clearing up!! Thanks for sharing.