All Comments on 'A Certain Exhibitionist’s Diary Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Well....

Actually I think that this fits in the Romance category too. A lot of it is about context and in this situation (sadly too brief) he comes across as a good Dom. Using the supposedly taboo words of slut and whore to describe her comes across as being part of the scene and not in an abusive negative attitude. Any sub would be happy to be seen, used and called slut, cunt, whore etc when done so by their loving Dom/ Domme.

When it’s said in a negative way as a slur then it rapidly undermines the confidence and self esteem of the sub. I’m a strong advocate of rebranding slut, cunt, whore, bitch to what it actually is; sexual freedom.

Currently this is a beautiful erotic story I hope it stays that way, it’s a very clever format presenting the majority of the action as a diary entry, it adds another layer of voyeurism to us as the readers. Really looking forward to reading more. 5 stars obvs 😉

Tess (UK)

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