All Comments on 'A CFNM Journey'

Good premise.

But the sex is too automatic. Too mechanical. And it seriously lacks details.

Three stars.

I have not given this story a rating. The story line is great, the general outline is good, but the pace of the story is “choppy “ and a little fast. You also need an editor or at least someone to proofread the story because the grammar gets steadily worse as the story moves forward. I gave up reading this story half way through it. Now honestly, I would not have written these comments out of meanness, I shared these thoughts because I believe that there is the potential for a really good writer and a fantastic story here.

No need to go yo the nudist colony, they can keep him naked at her house the entire weekend.

Sounds like a great start...

Especially since I'm loading the car and heading to our caravan with the wife on a Naturist site in the UK for the weekend..🙂

Well...it was fab. Love the ladies eating and sharing the boy spunk with him. Would be nice if you mentioned his cock size and ball size too. Nice story

To be continued..... so please continue.