All Comments on 'A Chance Encounter'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Best Story EVER !!!!!!!!!!!!

That was the best most erotic love story I have ever read. If I could have given it 10 stars I would have. EXCELLENT.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
superb story

I really enjoyed your story. It sounds so real. What a great ending to your quest.

bdbeautybdbeautyover 8 years ago
Loved it until the end

Great story, but the ending was rushed and seemed too much of a movie ending. The descriptions throughout were incredible, but perhaps not a "spend the rest of your lives together" ending next time.

norcal62norcal62over 5 years ago
Well crafted story, coming around to maturity.

He was laid out as immature in the extreme, and then he saw the light. It took a while though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
lovely story

This lovely story is flawed by being too short, and it should have been classified as a Romance. Well written, by a fine author.

MoMiner64MeteMoMiner64Meteabout 1 year ago

Very well thought out very well written.

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Thank you for reading my stories. I hope you find them both erotically charged, as well as thought-provoking. In the end, I'm just trying to tell good stories. I am an amateur, and I still have not figured out if I actually have any writing ability. I would appreciate if you...