by stfloyd56
That was the best most erotic love story I have ever read. If I could have given it 10 stars I would have. EXCELLENT.
I really enjoyed your story. It sounds so real. What a great ending to your quest.
Great story, but the ending was rushed and seemed too much of a movie ending. The descriptions throughout were incredible, but perhaps not a "spend the rest of your lives together" ending next time.
He was laid out as immature in the extreme, and then he saw the light. It took a while though.
This lovely story is flawed by being too short, and it should have been classified as a Romance. Well written, by a fine author.