by KarmasToy
I've enjoyed it so far! Don't stop writing! You've got some talent for this kind of thing!
You can't stop here. Your storytelling is incredibly hot. I can't wait to see how this plays out as she continues to become involved more deeply under Jack's mentorship. Great first effort!
There's more! Her mom and dad are away for a week and technically she is still a virgin. Please, please, please don't make her wait any longer.
Oh my goodness you have to write a chapter 3!!!!!!! The story is so good!