by KarmasToy
Oh my goodness you have to write a chapter 3!!!!!!! The story is so good!
There's more! Her mom and dad are away for a week and technically she is still a virgin. Please, please, please don't make her wait any longer.
You can't stop here. Your storytelling is incredibly hot. I can't wait to see how this plays out as she continues to become involved more deeply under Jack's mentorship. Great first effort!
I've enjoyed it so far! Don't stop writing! You've got some talent for this kind of thing!