All Comments on 'A Christmas Affair'

I gave it a 5, the story was hot, and fantastic, but a bit more editing could be useful. Missing words, extra words in sentences that don't belong there.... Not enough to make it unreadable, but it does interrupt the flow.

Great story!

An entertaining start. What happens next?

How long before Tom finds outs it's Sandy and Nick that are having the affair. Definitely needs more, very enjoyable so far.

Next chapter

Great story but I'd probably just leave it there instead of making it into a series. He seems like the kind of guy to be wracked with guilt once he sobers up (it's good that the writer kept it at "just" a BJ) so I don't see him engaging in a full blown affair with his wife's coworker who is over a decade younger (I assume, since she's an intern). This story is hot because it's the holiday season, which is always kind of magical, it's a spur of the moment, everything lined up perfectly, one and done night. I liked that it was written as just that night, those few hours at the party, no real backstory on any of the characters beyond the basics. It always seems like these kinds of stories, when given a sequel or series, veer off course so much, making the wife into the villain, making the young affair partner too slutty or crazy or pushy, the husband too weak. Leave it as-is. A magical night he can look back on fondly over the years

Need an editor, three stars.

It’s what the cucks want for Christmas. Wife who is a slut and hubby who is clueless and stupid. Guess they ran out of Chia Pets to care for or their Mom kicked them out her basement

They need yo continue meeting. He needs a pussy to play with

Use an editor! Good story. Could stand alone or be a series. We need to find out what happens the rest of the night. Does the wife wake up and pay attention to him? Did the wife set it up? Do they meet up later under the mistletoe? Does he get some later and who's is it?

So many questions left unanswered...

Hot! Had a similar experience in Miami once;)

Agreed, a touch of editing would help:)

Good story, but you need to either find an editor or use software. I find using ‘read aloud’ helps too. Still, enjoyed the tail - oops, tale.