All Comments on 'A Christmas Card from an Old Flame'

Nice story. Five stars.

Dangerous games!

5

I loved it, such an enjoyable story.

I agree with Boyd Percy, swapping can lead to disaster and divorce. 5/5

Another enjoyable romp from JBE. The rollicking, comic tone here is great. Just the tone sex calls for.

There does seem to be some plot confusion near the end: first Mary hadn't fucked the twins (she'd just done yoga poses) and then she HAD fucked the twins. I prefer "had," so I'm going with that. I prefer sexually adventurous heroines to faithful Penelopes.

Just as an odd, interesting coincidence: JBE (here) and I both have written some very appreciative words about Pittsburgh and particularly its Squirrel Hill neighborhood. It's been decades, but I still have fond memories of the place.

Dangerous and HOT! Thanks for the sexy interludes!...5 Stars!

@rancher46 yes; swapping can lead to divorce, however more often than not it leads to an amazing fun time and an even stronger bond for the couple.

I love the way you write. Situational imagery!

I'm very impressed with this story. Just the right amount of angst mixed in with the sexual situations. Well thought out and written with great characters. Appreciate you and your Muse for your imagination and abilities to put in your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.