All Comments on 'A Christmas Caroling'

by TheJoker33

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RRC2RRC25 months ago

This was fun. You captured the excitement very well.

StrappySandalsStrappySandals5 months ago

That's a lot of public sex in your own neighborhood... But it seems the neighbors all read Literotica... Highly enlightened I would say!! I'll never look at those carolers the same way...

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Appropriate premise for the season.

But everything sexual is meh.

No tension. Just a shopping list of actions.

Two stars.

strain_1999strain_19995 months ago

loved it keep up the good work

WittyUserNameWittyUserName5 months ago

Very nicely done! Your writing is improving! Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

5. Great! Just add a little tad of shy and reluctant... What about open the coat only if the people say or do something?

P. S. "Two inches heels" sounds my grandma zerosexy, please help my imagination with something more.

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I just wanted to give everyone a bit of an update today on March 27th, 2024. The Camping Trip series will be wrapping up shortly with two more chapters two come. If you like this series and it's characters then no need to fret at it's ending. I intend to start a new continuin...