All Comments on 'A Christmas Gift to Remember Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Not bad!

Good start.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
How about this for a teaser

Jerk gets gift from kindly sister.

He rewards her by calling her a slut

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Her Tits Grew!

Wow, her tits grew from 34c to 36c in three paragraphs. Christmas dinner must have been extra good that year.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
So Far So Good

A fairly decent story. Where is Chapter 02.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I want more!

I want to hear how you're going to make her cum!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
none

that was great but the second chapter im sure will be well worth the wait keep up the good work

hedonist66hedonist66almost 16 years ago
Careful

A good start, and a very hot story, and well told; but, you should pay attention to details, so you won't accidentally change them. Also, there was no description of how Aaron felt, either physically, or emotionally, as he came.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
no good

as usual this was way to rushed and unrealisticly stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
finish it

It says to be continued sooooooo continue it

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