All Comments on 'A Christmas to Remember'

Avery good story. Thank you.

A nice, well written story, but maybe a little too much reality for my taste this morning... I have no sister, but the incestuous fantasy of fucking my little sister is pretty strong!! Thanks for sharing!

Beautifully done.

This was a well written and enjoyable story. Thank you for the entertaining read.

Very well done. An interesting start to the story that had my attention. Then we were given a slow developing romance which worked out over time but held consequences for everyone. 5*.

Nicely written. A good story with a plot as well as piece of erotica.

The story just didn’t string together for me. First we started in the Mustang, then we’re in a Honda Civic and then we’re in the middle of an armed robbery? The beginning left me very confused.

I've seen this happen, and know they spent 20+years together before I lost track of them.

Thank you for the great story.

Great story. Your presentation was great

I liked it. The sad part is Mike being estranged from his mother.

What a great read! Well thought out and put to words! 5 stars just isn't enough!! Look forward to more stories! Thank you!!

I enjoyed that. Made me bookmark your other stories. I see your story ratings are quite good. I think I will enjoy the others. ***£

Loved the story and the interaction between the brother and sister. Thanks

Fantastic story. Great plotlines.

That was a very enjoyable story. Thank you for sharing. 5 Stars.

The writing was ok. You obviously read what you typed. Sometimes the vocabulary was a bit over the top. The story...eh. Not BAD I guess, but not a home run either.

I shall read more of your work as I come across it -

Krrp writing.

Love it

Nicely done. Thank you! I like the way the story ended where they were still in limbo but coping...

A bit different but I enjoyed it. When only the Anons are finding fault (and only some of them) it appears you are in good company, Good luck in the contest.

I'll not only check out the other contest entries I plan to sample more of your offering also.

Cheers

SAGE

Your story is good but you need to brush up on female anatomy. The hymen is not a keep fresh virginity seal. It is not supposed to break during penetrative sex and it definitely does not break from tampons. There is no physical signs of virginity or lack thereof. It's very disappointing seeing this in writing. If you're writing about a topic you should know about it.

Your writing is good but this is something that always breaks the immersion for me.

Not my favorite of yours, but not bad. I prefer the sappy happily ever afters, and this isn't. I'm not sure I fully understand the animosity between the MC and mom as mom's anger was directed toward the daughter, and they're now good friends. If mom can forgive the daughter, why can't she get along with the son? But like I said, overall a good read

Good story, understandable about the parents being old fashioned and their standards with the law. But on the other hand both Mike and Dee are still their own flesh and blood that they created that they still love and care for them.

Brilliant story loved it . thanks for writing it

Not gonna lie the mother is a, bitch lol

This is very sweet and touching.

Disappointed in this story because it was pretty good but the sex was over fast and the hymen part was stupid. Also the sister suddenly wanted to be with him after he gave her the ring in the car? I know he had feelings for her but she wanted to be with him afterwards before he got shot. Confusing at times and not your best story.