All Comments on 'A Christmas to Remember'

You can't even spell cuckqueen. That should have told me how bad the story was going to be. Horrible story. Never continue.

quote: seeing Chloe it the dress unquote

Easy to spot

Desperately needs an editor, so many typos misspelled words etc. That I couldn’t get beyond first chapter.

Just a few paragraphs in and found four errors. "Trident" for "tried?" "Hoe and ho" for "how?" A missing apostrophe on a possessive?

The story was NOT horrible!! I really enjoyed it. Like how he found his wife like that. I’m looking forward to the next chapter. However, anon was correct about spelling. Please get an editor. The grammar and misspellings make the flow of your story come yo a screeching halt. Then one has to figure out what you meant before moving on. I have edited many stories on this site for several authors. Feel free to Hit me up

Gj_sub86@yahoo.com. If not me, please find someone.

Next part please. That was so hot

Good effort, please continue the story!

Not a bad story. But please get someone to proofread your work. You spelling and punctuation suck.

I liked the story. The misspelling was distracting and took away from the story. Proof read or have someone else read it before you post the next one. Keep on trying

Difficult to read

I don't understand how this site allows such poor written, bad grammar stories to be posted. Used to be minor mistakes was enough to reject a story. Now, everything goes. Is this site slacking off, or are they so desperate for garbage stories, anything goes? Authors, have some pride of what you post. At least get an editor to help, if you're too dumb to know how to write properly. The education system must have failed. Aren't you ashamed? I guess hiding behind a fake name does help. 1*

Pathetic. 1*

A Christmas joke.

Yeah big nasty dripping STD case of nope.

But hey we're batting 1000 in the shit department today.

Decent story but horrible writing!

Need I say more?

More story please

Really nice story line, I would like to see what happens next. Proofreading for spelling would be a big help, or use a service like Grammarly.

Great,story line. This really needs to be edited. It’s really distracting to read through all the errors and misspelling

i tried to read this i just couldnt. the story seems like it would be good but this needs a lot of editing work done to it!

This story had too many errors for any enjoyment and I didn't make it through the first page.