by Katyusha
I loved this story. It was real, honest, and heartwarming. Thanks for sharing!!!
I'm truly sorry, but on a scale of "one" to "five", the most I can rate this story is a "seven"; okay, maybe an "eight" or perhaps a "twelve"......
[Very, very, nice; keep up the good work.]
-- KK in Texas
A story portraying real people with real emotions and honest doubt...and very erotic, to boot!!
Hope to see more of your work.
This story was perfect! The feelings were real, the details were fantastic and it was a pleasure to read. Excellent job!
not that I have any thing against gay or straight; but any one who has such ambivalent attitude is gay or bisexual and that's why they are "not sure" whether they want to commit to someone exclusively. if this were a true couple, within a few years the guy's gonna come out and say, "Val, I tried my best, to love you, but it is not working out..." <p>
"What are you telling me? That you have another woman?" <p>
"No! Val, I'll never do that to you!" <p>
"What, then?" <p>
"Well, I don't really know! I mean, I know, but I am not sure how I feel about it, about,,, him, or you,," <p>
"WHAT?"
the world isnt black and white. its gray.
and just because somebody has commitment issues doesnt mean they're gay or bisexual...
i thought it was a good story
This was one of the best stories I have read in a long time. The build up to the ending was great.. keep up with the great work, I cant wait to read more of your stories.
This is the first of your stories I've read. It was well written and very nicely done. Good job on the characters. You made them feel real. Congrats on a job well done.
High regards
DG Hear
This was a very sweet story and perfect for the holiday season. I would have liked to have seen more of how Spencer was feeling and how her family reacted, but other than that, it was a great story for the holidays. Good luck in the contest.