All Comments on 'A Christmas Wish Ch. 01'

There is no Oakland County Police Department, it should be the Sheriff's Department. Other wise I enjoyed what has been written so far.

J.

this is a terrible story that has nothing to do with the fun of Christmas. The worst part is this has happened to people before and this should certainly not be on literotica.com. shame on you for posting this on an erotic website as if this is supposed to be fun.

This is a very sad story but I am confident it will turn out well. I did find the story a little choppy - going back and forth between characters and scenes.

This is not Romance and has nothing to do with Christmas. It is an ugly story, and not even particularly well written. Nothing would induce me to hunt out any more parts of it.