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Anonymousalmost 13 years agoso wonderful
wow.. that was incredible and it got me so wet. there was so much chemistry and i want to lose my virginity to darell to.
Anonymousover 14 years agoo.k. needs work. sounds like a rough draft..
Story line was good, however did not seem to flow well. The wording was off, the ending was to abrupt. Suggestion: Research other erotic stories.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoit's ok
could have used a little more detail about the sex and a little less personal details
Anonymousover 19 years agoExcellant writing!
Loved the story and it was highly erotic and sensual..I felt like I was Darrel making love to YOU!!!!
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