All Comments on 'A Clinical Nightmare'

This is a really weird tale, but it would be a bit better in you had it proof-read because it appears that you are not a natural english speaker.

When you ask several people that offer their services as editors but they don't reply back... Anyways thank you.

Love the story line!

Kinky, fun, erotic, perverse....

Writing needs editing. Keep trying to find someone to work with you.

Yes, sadly what I'm looking for (full time editor) is hard to find, meanwhile I'm still writing other stuff I might post in the near future.