by HS98
Don't really like the father being included on the whole story, but otherwise is pretty good
@First Anonymous
There definitely will be. Not sure if I will continue this specific storyline, but I'm thrilled at the positive reception this story had gotten, and will definitely do more monster girl/demon girl stuff.
@Second Anonymous
Any way you can imagine !-).
@sporgasbored
Don't worry, as I said above, more of this stuff will definitely be coming.
@Third Anonymous
Don't worry, there's no other confirmation in the story about the father being involved in any other way than what she says. You can easily imagine that she had said that just to mess with him, I myself am not entirely sure whether that wouldn't have fit the story better than her telling the truth. And thank you for the kind words!
@SatyrDick
Thanks! It’s always great to see someone like what I wrote, but it’s especially so when that someone is another writer on here! I’m really glad that you liked this story!
I thought that it was pretty well done. The fear and tension is palpable and certain fits the category to a tee. I think a ratcheting up of adrenaline prior to the knocks could really turn this up a notch. Good work, hope to see more soon!
@Anonymous
Thanks for the kind comment, I’m glad that you’ve found so much to like in the story (even elements I haven’t focused much on😃). This is the type of a story/setting that I definitely plan on exploring more when I’ll get back to writing, so don’t worry, I can assure you that more like this will come😉.