by Whinston
I love it! Vicki & Yvette are so hot & I hope they hook up in the next chapter!
Really liked your story with Vicki and her dad. Don't care much for Yvette though, adding her made the story made the forbidden factor with Vicki and her dad lessen. Smut wise, rock on.
I really loved it. One of the few series, that didn't loses this tickling forbidden erotic into massive family-orgies. Can't wait to read the next part
Well done. Hurry with Chapter 5! and, hopefully, more! I, for one, hope there IS a family orgy! (Or, at least, a threesome or two). Keep it coming!
If he'd shoved that big cock right up aunties ass without libe and stretching she would have been screaming alright, but it wouldnt have been 'yes, yes, yes!', more like 'Arrrgh! Take it out!! You're ripping me!!', lol!
But oh, to have a nympho daughter that loves her daddy soooo much! ;) (and a loving sister in law doesnt hurt either!;)
It was alright until he stuck his tongue up the woman's ass. What a complete and utter turn off. Good bye.
The old guy
Wonderful story and great characters.
Don't let the negative comments worry you or change anything.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading.