All Comments on 'A Commanding Weakness Ch. 05'

Good job on this one, I got into it a bit more than part 4. Role reversal is always hot, although I was kinda hoping Wasp would be willing to have a non-hypnotized insider just in case with Delaney. Having a disgusted and disenfranchised crew member help the hacker without being hypnotized would’ve been a cherry on top, but looking forward to how you finish the story out regardless

An excellent, carefully-developed story; thank you for your creativity.

Your stories are always some of the hottest, but, for some reason, they also always give me a massive pit in my stomach.