All Comments on 'A Common Man'

Chapter 2 coming where Chelsea finally realizes it isn't worth it anymore and has enough money, so she retires, but before they can have the happy ending, the evil agent tries to screw them over?

Thank you.

First, I loved the story. A little uneven at times, but the situation had to develop during a storm. Still, I could see the characters and understand where they were coming from.

Jetpacksam hit the nail on the head. This screams for part 2. The agent tracks her down during her escapes and, rather than hurting his meal ticket, decides to Deal With the Situation. The commoner comes to pop star in her world, where she deals with the manager.

What they said!!!

Excellent story, but gotta finish it...and I love the idea jetpacksam put forth in some fashion...

Wonderful story!

5

Enjoyed the story but had some problem with him calling Chelsea sugar pussy. Almost demeaning to her, but I guess if she liked it and didn't mind, other than her first time, it's do able. Just not a common term of endearment one hears often.

Other than that, I liked the story. Thanks

Wonderful story. I hope she realizes she is in a better place-with David...

Great story, so few escape from the system of stardom. It is past time for the "rest of the story". 5

Sequel please