All Comments on 'A Controlled Descent Ch. 03'

jack didnt even get her an uber smh

This is great

I really enjoy how you have written her self inflicted internal struggle. I thought you brought her admission at the perfect time.

Though this genre isn’t a regular for my reading, as an author I find thrilling, gifted, and addictive. Bravo! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

He’s playing a dangerous game. That level of self loathing is incredibly destructive.

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)

You keep both of them likable. 👍💯

I'm excited to see what happens next!

Oh minor typo: I'm passed the point