All Comments on 'A Controlled Descent Ch. 05'

They dynamic needs you have created for her and how she now is thinking and processing are astounding. Your gift of the written word is truly amazing. I sit with bated breath wondering what Jack will teach her next.

Goodness this is an amazing series. Bravo!!! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I get how it fits the story but if a guy ever slapped me in the face it would be the last time he ever touched me.

What an amazing story. This is so great. The emotional stakes here are so clear and ring so true, the BDSM is just a lever for the emotional intimacy. Lovely, thank you for writing it.

This is getting better and better. So much more than just kink or sex. Thanks a lot.

This is excellent writing. I've not read the other parts to this story but I will be. Truly great work.

Very well written. For me the face slapping is a hard no. It’s not erotic pain to me, I just see it as violent which is a turn off for me. It did scare her and she didn’t like it so to me it looks like the safeword lesson failed? I guess that remains to be seen.

Thank you.

Tess (uk)

wow. just. incredible. i love this story. superb writing. truly love everything about it. hope to see more :)

Thank you for having such a clear understanding of BDSM without (or at least only little) cliché.

Breathless. You are a wonderful writer, Angeline. I imagine you took some sh*t taking 5 chapters to get to the actual BDSM in your BDSM story. But speaking as an ardent fan of your prose, I was comfortably (or uncomfortably, where you intended) along for the ride all the way. With one hand on the phone, the other inside my thong. Ooh, keep going...ES.

please post another chapter! can’t get enough! ❤️

What a delicious story. I don’t know if that’s the end, but either way I hope you continue writing. I am an enthusiastic fan.

I have no idea if people can make such breakthroughs in self awareness in so short a time, much less train themselves to come on command without simulation but damned if I don't want to believe!

Speechless. Another brilliant part. 5*

May this never stop.

V