All Comments on 'A Cousin's Reunion'

At the end of page 6 she takes off her panties, at the start of page 7 you have him take them off her! Did they grow back?

I think this is the third time I read it. Liked it as much as or more than the previous times. Excellent story.

A tale of wonder---love (well, a few hormones thrown in, but still...) sensitively and well told. Both of the main characters were well drawn and believable. 5 stars. Ignore those anal-retentive readers who fuss so much about irrelevancies. Your story struck a chord with me because I was hopelessly in love with my favorite cousin for years. She was certain that cousins could not and should not marry. And we lived in a state where cousin marriage was definitely illegal---but there were other states! Each of us married and have families. She was really the love of my life, and I carried her in my heart for many years. We're both 80 now and grandparents, and nothing will come of our love now. I have given up on my dreams of what might have been, but I love stories like this one where there is hope for happiness, even if deferred.

Wow, beautiful story. Romantic, erotic, and just taboo enough to be wickedly delicious.

Great, thanks

A marriage of which a spouse is not first choice, is doomed to fail.

A pity he has to cheat, understandable, but still.

Well written, though

Enjoyed it very much.

Fantastic storytelling from one of the site's finest authors. Although classified as an Incest story, this is really a Romance story par excellence. (Relations between first or second cousins is not really incestual). In this story, the plot is carefully constructed, and the relationship between the main characters grows at a steady pace. Sweet, tender, passionate, this gripping drama is outstanding in every respect. Five stars.

lovely story... still, i couldn't break my rule about not tolerating any "off ofs". cost you two stars.

it was very well written, however. I'll read your others!

Loved the story

Great story and developed nicely. All very plausible since I had a cousin I wanted to fuck in the same way. Never lived out my fantasy though.

I read the story over three nights. I loved it and never noticed any misspellings. If the readers would read it for its content and not its mistakes, they might enjoy it. I have a cousin I wish I could be half as intimate with. Maybe that's why I liked it so much. Lots of wishful thinking.

Very engaging dialogue and good interaction between the characters.

I love this story. It’s very romantic The dialogue and storyline are very good. Thank you for writing it. -Cheers

Very passionate and erotic. I can picture both of them so clearly in my mind's eye. Thanks for sharing your story.

You made me cry, damn it! Haven't read second chapter yet. Great story.

Loved the story. My only complaint is i wish they hadn't waited so long in life to meet up again.

Still fully enjoyed it 5/5

That story was almost the same story as my cousin and I, just in different settings and timeline. Great writing, took me back 40+ years! Thank you for sharing it!

The story was very well plotted and written; a real romance!

I was attracted to the story because I was married to my first cousin for almost 50 years until cancer took her away. She was European-born, and in her country (where we were married) the marriage was legal; it was not at the time in several of the states we subsequently lived in. Every state has laws that are crazy and should be repealed, but haven't been. We, and our doctor, were mildly concerned that our children might have issues because of our genetic relationship, but both were healthy and normal. We never publicized that we were cousins, but never suffered anything from family or the few friends who knew. And I maintained a Department of Defense Secret clearance for most of my working life.

My Cousin Jane was very much the same. We had a shared cabin in the mountains by big bear lake. She liked to sunbath nude and we massaged oil onto each other. Never penetrated her but everything else was fair game. Always like your story telling and looking forward to your next.

Wonderful story. Reminded me of a weekend I spent with my cousin. Too, too short but lots of good memories. Thank you..

This was fantastic, Now I know why you won. Your writing style is great. Thank you very much.

Great story! So much more than endless orgasms and other unrealistic fantasies.

And the end is so moving! Thought I was gonna tear up wishing they were together again. Somehow, the way life works, I wonder if she ever got to get those panties back.

Seems the good part of life is so damn short! And opportunity lost due to shyness or worry that the other person wasn’t in the same place......they are lost and NEVER return. Gad I hope these two get a chance to spend a bit of their autumn together.

Wonderful love story between cousins, I see two cousins being together permanently with the next visit of Julie to her cousins. I can see with the two cousins in an intimate relationship breaking up the remaining marriage. Will be interesting to see how it all unravels. Well done 5 start

I really enjoyed this story.

Not too over the top, definitely plausible storyline.

Please continue writing.

As title

Really well done story. Thank you for this!

Great story bad sad ending. Why can she marries him.

Theirs relationship is based on their mother not their father.

It is a stupid things and stupid laws.

Great story. Loved every moment of it.

Back in 69, my own cousin and I were going to the same community college. She is 4 years older then me and back then, she invited me to her home. She was living with some guy who had been out of town. We were in her pool and started playing around. One thing led to another and we started fucking in the pool, then a lounge chair , and finally to her bedroom where for the next 2 days, all we did was to fuck each other.

We drifted apart as she got married and I joined the Navy. After I retired 30 years later, I called her and told her I was in town where she lived in. She told me I could stay at her apt. She took the couch as she wanted me to sleep in her bedroom. About 1 or 2 in the morning, next thing I knew she was in bed with me and started giving me a blow job. For the rest of the night and most of the morning, we fucked. That was 15 yrs ago. She is now 75 and I am 71.

If we were not cousins, I would have married her.

Someone advised you wrong. Each state can legally allow or not allow first cousins to legally marry. Wisconsin allows it.

This makes me miss my cousin.. how I loved her.. she took my virginity when I was 16..

Really enjoyed it! Thanks. I will watch for more of your stories.

I slept with my favorite first cousin a few times. She was the most incredible thing I ever had in bed. I married a super hot girl much younger than myself and still my cousin owned me. I am 60 and she is 59 now and she is still deadly hot, she passes for early 40's and still has the same body. I still get hard just thinking about her. This story literally sent me thru the roof- thanks.

Very realistic, hot, soft and sexy. Reminds me of my youth. Cousins were great learning partners.

Yet another great one from a very talented writer. This was both romantic and very sensual, my compliments to you.

Whew! Nice, gentle, erotic story. It did not sound like bullshit like so many other stories. I grew up in a massive blended family and my first wife also had a huge family. There are so many sensuous cousins and aunts in my family, that sex between us was more regular an occurrence than anyone in the family would admit. My mother's side alone had 23 children so counting multiple marriages, there are at least 30 female cousins that I grew up around, and being a horny young man, I would have had sex with almost every one, and even a few aunts who married into the family. Then there was my dad's side and stepdad's side too...etc...etc...I won't lie, I had sexual relations with several aunts, cousins, and due to such a huge family, I even was with a few nieces who were actually my age and older. The same with aunts and cousins. Having said that, it was rather "N()r^^@!" to engage in sexual escapades with cousins. Nieces and aunts are a little different, but all were of age when I was with them. I have a lot of material to use in my upcoming stories and your story reminds me of being at my cousin's cottages during the summer, and one time in particular when I had the great pleasure of engaging in sex with my older cousin, Doris, who was a very delicious redheaded milf, age 37, and I was 18. I was working at the cottage resort that summer as my first summer job after high school. What a summer that was as I ended up being a male sex toy for Doris, her sister-in-law, Monique, and her sister, Lois, who was the one I lusted over more than any of them.

Enough for now...please watch for my first short story about sex with cousins, aunts, and nieces, and even a few threesomes. I'll be reading more of your tales, especially if they're like this one.

Loved it

like all your stories - well written and great sex. loved the tale. as someone else says, not the ending i wanted, but a really wonderful romantic tale!

First cousins can marry most places in the world too, which does make these stories a bit wierd to read for those of us not in one of them. In some parts of Europe incest laws only cover underage children, even.

Was a nicely written bit of romance, those oddities aside. The 18 year age of consent thing is another one of those, so we do learn to work around...

I loved this story! Enough said!

I felt this was a well written and balanced love story WITHOUT the desired ending. How can any couple spend this much time in love with each other without finding some type of a solution in spending the rest of their lives together?

What a touching love story with a little sex thrown in. You had me all emotional and... Well done. Very well done.

In the USA, 25 states permit first cousin marriage. In some cases where families are small and parents are deceased, first cousins get married but keep their mouths shut. Siblings do the same.

The main drawback to cousin marriage is the associated families who don't approve or flap their mouths to others who don't approve. Cousins can have a successful marriage and children if the keep their distance from other family members. Siblings have successfully married by moving to the other end of the country from the rest of their family. The two main activities to avoid are politics and government service where a security clearance is required. Beyond those - live happy and enjoy

I loved it.

And 1st cousins can legally marry in the UK.

Rapier

The story coves a lot of ground but focuses on the two cousins over a period of years. I kept myself hard through the whole tale. Wish I had an alluring cousin like her.

This...

This story touched me. Deeply. The character's were opened up a little bit at a time and not instantly like "I'm Bob, she's my cousin Sara, we fuck". It really swept me into the story... and it brought in memories of forbidden lust, to my own cousin back in the past... I fell for one of my cousins. Badly. I think she fell for me too, at least a tiny bit, but as we were never ever just the two of us... Except for the one time she wanted to kiss me. And as a teenager, what could a guy do? Play it down in tease (and not in a good way).

One has to wonder what might have happened, if that one time we actually did kiss? We hugged few times and I let my hands wander, she didn't mind. Just the little things, the little curious looks she gave me, those teasing eyes.

And after all, it would have been legal to do whatever I wanted with her, except for marrying (would have been possible after presidential permission, no less) on the spot.

Thanks for this story. Thanks for how you wrote it. Thanks for making it feel so damn real.

The theme is more common than a lot of cousins are willing to admit.

It is legal in australia (i think)

Wish i had a sexy cousin!

Wonderful story and developed beautifully. Sometimes I think some of our laws are bad... understand some of the ramifications of family genes but, when two so love each other I think they should have been able to do so. I know that even now there are probably 1st cousins back in the hollows of rural south living and loving... good for them. I had a cousin, although not a 1st I loved as a young man. However, nothing ever happened. She didn't even know.

Not legal where i live, and only marginally legal where the story takes place. In that state the woman has to be over 55 or permanently sterile.

google it yourself.... Cousin_marriage_law_in_the_United_States_by_state

Now, can we put this particular line to rest? For those that have defended me...thank you.

One commenter noted that you had written that "First cousins aren't allowed to marry...and for that matter aren't supposed to have sex." The commenter went on to say that "If you just do a simple Google search, you wouldn't write the last two sentence[s]."

I couldn't let that statement go by without offering a comment of my own, as it relates to my own somewhat painful history. Your story is clear that statement that "First cousins aren't allowed to marry" was in the mind of your male protagonist, who was at the time 20 years old. That put it 30 years in the past. Thirty years in the past from your story date of 2011, there was no such thing as the internet or Google - no way your character could have done a Google search.

I say this is somewhat painful because I was under the same mistaken impression at a similar age and a similar point in time when I fell in love with my first cousin. I carried a torch for her for years, and am pretty sure it was mutual. We definitely had each other as our closest opposite-sex friends, but it seemed to run much deeper. I eventually went to the local authorities to inquire about the possibility of marriage, and it was definitely illegal in my state fo marry my first cousin. I had no way of readily looking it up to find out about differences in other jurisdictions. I just know that between the attitudes of our families and the statements of the authorities, I let the love of my life get away. Your story rang far too true for me to remain silent when an anonymous commenter ridiculed your supposed lack of research.

You've inspired me. Perhaps I will soon write a story about my experience with my cousin...

AB

So.... where was this guy working as an electrical apprentice to get weekends off? Most of my apprentiship I worked almost every weekend for months on end. Some of the jobs required us to put in 70 hour weeks to meet the schedule... I think I need a change of venue...... ;)

Loved this long story about growing up & finding that his cousin was a great sport & as interested in him, as he was in her. They worked up their relationship from playful groping to fingering each other and initial use of a condom. The extra step was taken as they finally went 'bearback' and he unloaded his sperm inside her. That really set the story at the ultimate level of interest.

I hope the author pens a lot more stories of family action.

Good story, but very sad. If there is love, they need to fight for they love to survive it. Julie was married twice and has divorced her two husbands, so their love was damaged. He has had already a failure love, and seems that his relationship with his current wife not is perfect.

I understand that they have problems when they were 19 years of age, but not afterwards, still looking and having sex. The development could have been happier.

If your relationship was only of lust, then the story is good.

Despite a few grammatical and spelling errors, which the volunteer proofreaders did not see, this was a well-written, believable and touching tale of forbidden love. (At least, it was forbidden in the family these cousins belonged to).) I also wished that the two loving cousins would get together more often, and that they might eventually catch each other between marriages and stay together-- but I realize things very often don't work out the way we would like them to, in this world. The way you left the story is both hopeful and realistic. You don't need to create a happier ending for us.

Sorry to rain on your parade here, but cousins get married in the USA and in other countries. And have kids !!! Charles Darwin married his cousin and had 10 kids. Feel free to look up other famous cousins that got married and had kids

A very nice and sweet/sour tale. The first part until they went to bed is the very best. A bit surprising that they did not make love at first chance in the boat on the reunion. Even that he was still married the attraction seeing again would lead to some action.E67

I did give this 5*. But I'm ambivalent about the last reunion. Why did you make him married? With him being married, he cheated on his wife and was planning to continue to cheat on his wife. Why? You gave us nothing o show that they were separated, or about to divorce. The story would have been equally effective if he was divorced or widowed, and he had to leave for business reasons or perhaps to help his youngest get to college.

I like the use of time how after so long they still go at it

Great story well written with very believable characters... and incredibly sexy and sweet.

Stories like this should be read for the enjoyment, not to have occasion to prove what a great proof-reader you are.

I too wish that she would have gotten pregnant and had his child and would have end up living together and have more children by her cousin`

I don't known how to vote with this one. I was hoping she did fall pregnant and that they did get together somewhere down the line and lived happily ever after but this story was more like a Shakespearean tragedy where he lost her not once but twice. The story itself was good I suppose but not the storyline or ending I wanted.

If I did then I don't deserve to be trusted to edit any others of your stories!!!!!!!

j

This was a great story and I'd like to see additional chapters.

I go four stars... love the story, but spelling/grammar is important in writing. Thanks.

Please tell me there will be more?!

I am in love with this!!!!! Could feel my heart break both times they had to part. Can't stop wondering when, and how long until Julie goes to see him!

I need to know what happened next !!!

This story deserves far more than 5 stars. So many visual details, I felt I was in the (hot) story. Absolutely loved it.

Nice work. It captures well the feeling of a wonderful connection with someone that you know cannot last. There is something amazing and sweet about a finite period of time when you can share all that you want, knowing that it will go away. The forbidden aspect of cousins, who have a common life history and seen each other grow up, makes it even better. Good story flow, nice setting of the mood. Very enjoyable.

Have to agree with the great comments.. You write stories that are worth my time to read. Thanks for your time, efforts and word skills. Love the ending.... More please.

Waiting, not too patiently, for Julie's return...

Outstanding story!!!! Can't wait to see if you continue the story...

that was a very sensual story as i had a cousin that i loved dearly we didnt have sex but we did almost everything togeather

This is one of the bst writings I've ever had the pleasure of reading here.B

The only disappointing point was that it had to end. You must write part two, this is too good a tale to end here. They seem made for each other, you have to make that happen somehow.

Just a great 5 star story - thanks!

I enjoyed this story very much errors or not this has been one of the best overall stories I have had the pleasure of reading.

this story is so life like , it could of happened . the sad thing is the happiness and love had for each other, by way was pretty strong, will only be seen on brief encounter's .I cant imagine going thru life knowing I loved someone heart and soul to no end and not being with them to enjoy the rest of my life with them .society suckes

Very nice story!

Enjoyed the read tremendously.

Please write a second part! Or more...

But she has to get her panties back, can't leave her running around bare... ;-)

Yes; I did notice a few errors, but my brain is sharp enough to catch and correct them as I read.

I was very sorry that they went their separate ways; based upon their histories, I'd say that they both made a huge mistake and would've been better off dealing with it honestly, giving it a shot, telling the family.

I'm very surprised that the parents didn't catch them 2nd time around ( Noise travels well on a lake front ), talk about it and admit that Grandma told them about what she "heard" so long ago ( noise travels even better in small cabin and had nowhere to go )

It used to common for first cousins to marry; and I'd guess that family members saw how these two acted around each other when they were younger and figured that they would get together, and raise a family. There might have been a long running bet about it. I once met an older (by almost 15 years) cousins daughter and fell "head over heels in love with her", I never said or did anything because I was 15 or so and we all lived 400 or so miles apart; but I've thought about her a lot over the years.

I was thinking as many of the other readers; why would a wife be overseas for 6 months? She could get sick, have an accident, meet someone else, send a letter and say "I want a divorce"; which would let them get together. And at their age "I'm pretty sure that No One would raise a fuss". It is best for everyone to find someone that they're happy with. He could retire any day, or find a job locally and stay with her at the lake!

Thanks you for an endearing story;

DKP

Nice Story - Would enjoy a Part II

Loved the story. Hated the writing. You really need to get an editor or use spellcheck or something. The story itself is really touching and hot, but there are so many spelling and grammatical errors that it was at times very distracting. The story itself was interesting enough that I read through them, but others obviously couldn't. That said, and to be fair, the errors seemed to become less frequent and less glaring as the story went along, but they were still a distraction from what was otherwise a really good story. Their initial encounter was really hot, but the reunion years later was a really nice touch and fairly realistic. I was glad they didn't jump each other's bones in the boat but waited till later. Much more like what you would expect from middle-aged adults. True, it is fantasy and the premise itself is implausible, but if it were likely, I think that's how it would play out. Get this edited and resubmit and I think you will get a lot of good responses.

This story was amazing..

Good stuff. Had problems putting it down.

Loved it. I especially loved that it continued after the initial affair when they were young.

very hard to enjoy a story that is so poorly written and was never properly edited. the writer should be ashamed to put his name on it this was deffinetly a FIRST DRAFT nothing more. i wish the writers would stop paying idiots like OLDED and others for rave reviews.

Thank you for sharing & bringing back memories of missed opportunities

I enjoyed this story, I was able to connect with it on several levels, but it was a little slow-burning - perhaps splitting it into several chapters, with a few more sexual encounters over the intevening years would move it along a little. Just my opinion, though, not a criticism, I like your narrative style, so keep it up.

Good story but would like to see a continuation of when they meet at his place and then maybe become a couple. His wife could send him a letter saying she's leaving and staying wherever she is overseas.

I think the story was well written and kept you imagining it happening. I would ignore the comments from some critics who seem to be more concerned about a spelling error on style of writing. The purpose of these stories is to entertain.

Some people love to complain about nothing.

Signing this as anymoose to avoid backlash on my stories

Thank you for your attention to my story. I would never post a first draft, and this was far from the first draft. As a writer, I create the sights and sounds and feelings with the intent of drawing the reader into the story and becoming part of the story. I know I have shortcomings, and proofreading my own work is one of them. It is far too easy to read what I intended to write instead of what I actually wrote. To that end I have two VOLUNTEER editors that do their best to keep me on the straight and narrow.

For those of you who find the quality of my editors proofreading to be flawed, I encourage you to PM me and offer to provide your own proofreading services. I would be happy to provide one of my many stories, perhaps even this one, proofread.

To those of you who enjoy my works and comment HONESTLY about how you enjoy them in spite of the occasional typo or error missed by my very dedicated and wonderful proofreaders, thank you and I hope you continue to read my stories.

assholes like olded ruin this site with kiss ass reviews instead of honest reviews. this story needs a total rewrite by a GOOD WRITER not a grade school dropout. if all readers would comment honestly and only on the story the writers and the site would greatly improve. never ever post a first draft and this was a first draft.

I'd love to see a part two, having them meet again and maybe finally become a permanent couple.

need and editor or to be split into chapters. These so-called experts just spurt a lot of bull semen.

Your story was good and did what it was written for ... to excite and tantalize.

Love it please continue

It's now obvious that you have a religious hang up and that's why you continue to rip ever story you read but you still read them all. There is something sick about you it's to bad you can't come clean to the witters about your personal hangups. Your efforts will never stop the witters or us readers from enjoying this site. So do your best you never suckcede I hope you noticed the spelling. I gave this very good story a 5 sorry for your luck.

There are errors in my posting. just to prove a point!

Just look at your own post.

ED

This story was put here for all of to enjoy, the author did a very good job to bring us along with the story, Also he did a great job of showing the feeling of the players.

SO, My question to you is,,,,,,,,,,,,Just what and who gives you the right to rip a writer apart as you have done. I have seen your comments on other very good stories, you sir (and I put that in lower case) must remember that this is not english lit 101!.

I will make the same comment to you that I have made to others,,, If You Are So Damn Good,,,,,, Show Us What You've Got, give us the chance to read some of your musings.

To the author,,,,

thank you for your wounderful story!. Please do not let a fool stop you from writing.

Please continue on with this story.

Thanks for the read

ED

great story, hot as hell. Please continue the stroy

I agree, please write more chapters, as this is such a great story and the opportunities for even hotter and special events. I would like to see Julie try more cum on play; as she got real hot with oral. Maybe, his wife will go here own way or join in; as she might know of his past with Julie when they were so young ?

Thank you again as your story is arousing, sensual and just plain hot !!