by SanityCheck
Enjoyable story! Good characters. Seems more like Sci-fi/Fantasy to me than Non-Erotic. I don't like 12 pages of reading. Maybe break it up into three parts.
5
Nice story. A good well written story doesn't need a bunch of sex scenes in it. I knowI, I know, this is an erotic story web site. 5 stars
A well written story that I enjoyed.
People ignore/deny refuse to believe spiritual things.
I have experienced some things that point to spiritual reality personally.
I refer to from above rather than from below.
Though I have seen that to.
Is the universe an accident?
Or is it an orderly planned existence?
Cheers
Very well done! Looking forward to the coming books. Any schedule?
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The books are complete and will be published on my regular schedule. Book two will be published near the 1st of June, and book three will be published near the 1st of July.
Enjoyed both of your murderstories but can't find The Dregs of Murder in your list nor doing a search for stories. A problem listing it? good writing
An interestings story, as it is my second reading. A one time gift? I truly believe it. My wife told me stories of her and her sisters sensing or knowing something as their parents passed. There are many other unexplained happenings between people with gifts, sensing happenings or visions of of some kinds? There are many things that can't be quantified or proven but they have happened and been documented. The great pyrimds in Egypt, deep into the pyramids are rooms with artifacts and who knows what but how did they lights those rooms to work on them? There is no signs of soot from burning candles or oil lamps. Electricity? Did have it back then? Who knows. The pictographs of people and the hieroglyphics' showing halos around their heads? Maybe halos were space helmets? Who really knows. Are your a believer, a creationist or is Darwin's theory right? Has all you see in nature evolved from by accident in a mud puddle? Do you believe in the Bible? Just remember the Bible was written by men like you and I. 5 stars