by soppingwetpanties
Very well written, but one thing I don't get; Keiko is a dominatrix and a virgin? That doesn't seem plausible. But I still give it five stars.
The humiliation scenes were great though. Keiko needs to do some CBT on Dax.
Well-written, but none of the characters show any redeeming quality, which is most disappointing given the possibilities evident in the first chapter.
The story was engaging and difficult to put down. The characters were deeply flawed, often unlikable, but very well drawn. I love stories that have quotable lines. Like this:
“No apology necessary. We all find our own path through life."
"Yeah ... that's true ... I think my path just went down shit creek."
"Don't worry Sir. I'll meet you there with a paddle."