by tobloved
Im so glad you wrote another chapter. this is a great story and i cant wait to see what happens next.
Patrick seems convinced he manipulated Camille, but I fail to see any such deception. Of course, he might need to be a little more sneaky to take her cherry, in which case he'll need to stop thinking of himself as a "nice guy".
I keep hopeing that the next chapter will be here every time I visit. I really want to see the girl lose her cherry. Please finish it up.
He said that he 'manipul8ted' her in2 giving him a BJ & swallowing his load, but she seemed pretty willing 2 me! I fail 2 see the manipulation involved there, really. She was horny, too! Gr8 story, Man. I really liked this chapter of your series. I could give less than a damn about her getting screwed, actually. Your directions on how she should give a BJ were letter perfect I think! A-Ok, dude. Keep writing 'em
... think he's all that.
the fact that Pat thinks that his charms got an absolute virgin to make his cock the first one in her mouth when she wanted it more, speaks more to pat than anything else. Plus the narrator never said he manipulated her, Patrick thought it.
Are you working on another chapter, yet? If not, start on it, please. I wonder which of Patrick's friends would like Camile's bod.
I like the name Camile: she really blows one away (but in a good way, unlike something in August of 1969 with her name).
This is my fave story! Totally hot! Bring on the next chapter!
Girls LOVE sucking Cock, M8! She prolly wanted 2 do it even B4 rgis opportunity 'arose' LOL
Sorta reminded me of the first time my ex blew ME, honestly. True, we were in a Baseball bleachers, rather than a shower, but the basic theme was the same! I am not as enormous as Pat, but she thot so! Heh heh heh
Mmm BJs!
i'm a lesbian and love stories with pussy eating in it. imma get my girlfriend to eat my pussy after reading that story. fuck i'm horny!!!!!!!
the manipulation was when he said shelly loves to swallow, prior to saying that she was going to spit it out.plus if he hadn't started the shower thing the blowjob would have never happened.
Please continue its just an awesome thing you have written so far
You MUST continue!!! I can't wait to see if he meant it in the shower when he finally get's her to let him make love to her...
You need to continue this story, you should make it all come to fruition in a great fuck.
Great series but need another or several more segments. The roomy finally getting some dick and then having sex with her roommate and a nice threesome.
Certainly a hot story with great continuity. Got me hard.
Vince
Please complete more in this series. My wife and I love this story line!!!