All Comments on 'A Curious Roommate Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great story

Im so glad you wrote another chapter. this is a great story and i cant wait to see what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Mmmm....

Can't wait to see what happens next. Don't leave me hanging!

ErotonautErotonautover 17 years ago
All consensual

Patrick seems convinced he manipulated Camille, but I fail to see any such deception. Of course, he might need to be a little more sneaky to take her cherry, in which case he'll need to stop thinking of himself as a "nice guy".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
More!!!!!

I keep hopeing that the next chapter will be here every time I visit. I really want to see the girl lose her cherry. Please finish it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Marvelous BJ story!

He said that he 'manipul8ted' her in2 giving him a BJ & swallowing his load, but she seemed pretty willing 2 me! I fail 2 see the manipulation involved there, really. She was horny, too! Gr8 story, Man. I really liked this chapter of your series. I could give less than a damn about her getting screwed, actually. Your directions on how she should give a BJ were letter perfect I think! A-Ok, dude. Keep writing 'em

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
just b/c she wanted it, doesn't mean he doesn't...

... think he's all that.

the fact that Pat thinks that his charms got an absolute virgin to make his cock the first one in her mouth when she wanted it more, speaks more to pat than anything else. Plus the narrator never said he manipulated her, Patrick thought it.

Are you working on another chapter, yet? If not, start on it, please. I wonder which of Patrick's friends would like Camile's bod.

I like the name Camile: she really blows one away (but in a good way, unlike something in August of 1969 with her name).

cattyxoxocattyxoxoalmost 16 years ago
I wish Patrick was my first!

This is my fave story! Totally hot! Bring on the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Manipul8ed, My eye!

Girls LOVE sucking Cock, M8! She prolly wanted 2 do it even B4 rgis opportunity 'arose' LOL

Sorta reminded me of the first time my ex blew ME, honestly. True, we were in a Baseball bleachers, rather than a shower, but the basic theme was the same! I am not as enormous as Pat, but she thot so! Heh heh heh

Mmm BJs!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
fuck yeah!

i'm a lesbian and love stories with pussy eating in it. imma get my girlfriend to eat my pussy after reading that story. fuck i'm horny!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Best story evah

This is fucking awesome man

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
amazing story

loved the story please right more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
manipulation

the manipulation was when he said shelly loves to swallow, prior to saying that she was going to spit it out.plus if he hadn't started the shower thing the blowjob would have never happened.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

seriously write the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
please continue

Please continue its just an awesome thing you have written so far

TwilightfanTwilightfanover 10 years ago
Ch.03

You MUST continue!!! I can't wait to see if he meant it in the shower when he finally get's her to let him make love to her...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

You need to continue this story, you should make it all come to fruition in a great fuck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hot

Great series but need another or several more segments. The roomy finally getting some dick and then having sex with her roommate and a nice threesome.

Certainly a hot story with great continuity. Got me hard.

Vince

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

It's nice,hope they end up with each other

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story!

Please complete more in this series. My wife and I love this story line!!!

Anonymous
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