All Comments on 'A Dancer In The Family'

So his daughter is a prostitute, great stuff eh?

Just gotta be proud......

Scores 1/5

Can’t wait for wifey to come to the club

Not bad, but not as detailed as your other stories.

What a tale that is, very amusing , I saw it cumming, but it was not lost on me. Enjoyed it 5 🌟

I think you may have been rushing this story to it's completion, as you left out a couple of critical items, like how did he get to a strip club? Why pay a valet when you take an uber? Why pay your daughter for some pussy???

I think the experiment was a success! Very hot story and should get high ratings unless some of the Loving Wives BTB crowd wonder by. That last scene should leave them apoplectic! ;-)

Cheers

SAGE

Frigging Wargamer.. 1) It's his stepdaughter; learn to read. 2) Hot tight pussy is good no matter who it belongs to. 3) You're obviously a loser.

She has two more holes to fill yet!

Great story. Loved it

Loved it especially with the wife in on it and getting her own! Five stars and a favorite point!

This guy loves the term “hot liquid heat” lol

The best of both worlds. Add more tags so others can find this story and know what they are in for like loving wife, hotwife, cuckold and incest. What a great story!

Would love to see a follow-up on this story like how mother and daughter are so close. Mother and daughter had a crazy trip together and ended up sleeping with a couple of hot guys over a year ago. Since then they have opened up to each other and shared every sexual fantasy. When the mother visited her daughter at university a few time they always ended up fucking around with guys together even shared a few. Now that the father knows a little about what's going on they include him by setting up a "double date". The twist is he doesn't know until they are out on their date night that his daughter is his date and the younger guys (yes guys with an s) are his wife's dates (turns out two guys show up at the restaurant for his wife). They all go back and the husband gets to see for the first time how much his wife loves sex just as the daughter does. All night they can't stop making eye contact with husband/father while being fucked because it turns them on even more.

Please make this happen but with your writing style.

Just OK - Not up to your usually excellent caliber.

Also - one minor piece of constructive criticism. A masseuse is female; the masculine form of the word is masseur.

I've had this same fantasy for years..fucking Hot !

As soon as the Father said his Daughter wasn't his, I lost interest. Sounded like it was gonna be a hot story but I don't consider this Incest.

Fuck i love your stories...it's so hard to wait for them 😪 but damn if it ain't worth it. Let's just say I'm going to need to change my panties before bed 😉 ! Thanks for sharing your incredible talents with us.

This story begs for a follow-up to the texts between the mom and daughter! We need to know how this plays out!

Now that is a very hot fantasy. I wonder if mom and daughter planned everything after he discovered her dancing?

Very wet pussy after reading that... mmmm yum.

Well, I have to call this tale a phantasy about the utter moral decline of the U.S.- American family. It's thoroughly disgusting although I do keep in mind that it is only a story. The author describes the "whore-ification" of the American society on a number of different levels. Alright, I'll leave all of you who get off on this to yourself.

One song kept running through my mind as I read this...The J. Geils Band "Centerfold"

I kept thinking through the whole thing, "Why hasn't Gayle queried about visiting their daughter?" I mean, come on! What parent is going that far on a business trip to the same town where their daughter goes to school and doesn't set aside time for her as well? But the ending implies that Mommy is already aware of what Libby is doing, so maybe Libby ratted out Dad that first night? Good reading but I can't go higher than a 3. Sorry.

Huh... Either the daughter already knew her mom was doing something she shouldn't... or she hoped to break up their marriage...

Her last comment supports the first supposition.

Since Daddy had only been fooling around this week seems likely wifey has been fooling around longer...

Definitely a question that might require an answer to know if continued marriage is in the books...

Also, sounds like daughter isn't really too discriminating... might consider getting STD tested when you get back home, Daddy...

That’s a naughty daughter. I loved it.

Did Libby ever say why? Gayle seems just as much a mystery. Is Libby still going to school?

Loved this one, MDM! Great read!

Great twist, enjoyable !

Too far out!

Bill S

Way to good! LOVE this story.....

Why would a person leave a negative comment about how disgusting this story is if they are reading incest stories on this site? What do you expect ? Hypocrite.

Yes, I agree, part of this is hot but also very squicky. Sharing two vag. with however many men and whoever can pay for it is a big turn off. Yuck!

Great story, covers many people's fantasy

Strip clubs are usually the next city over from the university, so the father would never find out by just visiting his daughter. But his wife knew, and knew her husband would find her eventually, because it wasn't the first time he went to a strip club while on business (he knew the rules when Godzilla asked). So the wife and daughter planned this as a way to get Mom permission for her infidelity and get her daughter her father's dick that all little girls fantasize about. STD's don't usually exist in fantasy lit, or the girls use condoms with normal customers, but not with Daddy. As Herojab said, this is a good setup for a double date, with Mom getting air tight and Daddy taking all his daughter's holes one at a time. And ending with Mom and daughter showing Daddy how they get along during Mom's visits...

What a wicked little girl needs her bottom smacked!

5 stars fantastic.

Still think she's a wicked little girl, but wouldn't you just love to share your house with her, as long as there was a payoff at the end. Still five stars.

Just some strip club trivia.

Ever notice the abundance of ultraviolet "black" lights there? Semen fluoresces (glows) under UV light. So the women can tell if you're a potential customer, or just looking and drinking.

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Sexcellent Story!

11/10!!!!!

So hot loved it

An interesting story. Not 5 star great but good. Lots of questions unanswered but would make a good second chapter. Keep up the good work. MtM

That late at night Libby should have joined her Daddy back at his hotel room to continue... all night long.

I hate when you think it's an incest story and its not.

The time he shouted “Jesus Christ “ was totally unnecessary. It didn’t add to the story & denigrated it.

The part about his wife getting fucked was also detracting. The story of him & his daughter was terribly hot though. And the information that he was not her biological father allowed even more heat.

Bill S.

Normally, as soon as I see your nom de plume on a story, I know I’m in for a good read. This time however, your improper and overuse of semi-colons drove me to distraction - to the point I couldn’t finish the first page without commenting. I realize I risk being called the grammar police but I am both a professional author and a college professor. I’m more erudite and sophisticated than your average Literotica reader and expect more from my favorite authors. I recommend you find a better editor.

You really need an editor who knows what they’re doing. A woman massage professional is called a masseuse. A male massage professional is a masseur. Correct word choice makes all the difference in conveying the correct meaning.

Fucking your step daughter doth not incest make . . . .

It was fun to read, but won’t engender reading again. 4 stars.

Bill S.

good story,,it was fine.

You do come up with some interesting situations. Some better developed than others.

WOW! Very hot. Could easily support a follow-up. Did Libby go back to the hotel with dad? Mom's involvement was unclear to me and a further story could clarify what was going on. Did mom know about Libby's career?

In any event, great story, lots of fun.