All Comments on 'A Dark & Stormy Night'

Absolutely outstanding! Please continue if possible with their story! Thank you for posting this to read.

It's great to see you writing again.

Well done. I enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing.

This was great. I hope you write more involving this couple.

Great story. Please continue with more chapters if possible.

Please continue this story! I got into it so much and just wasn't wait to see what happens next and all! Great job!

I think that that was the very best story I have ever read.

This Is the First Time I actually enjoy reading the ENTIRE story without skimming thru one lil bit of it. very light reading yet entertaining. :) Cheers,

such a sweet story with just the right amount of sexiness

I think this is one of the best stories I have ever read.

real top plot, with top writing. pleez do sequel -cum on, her parents were away the whole w/end, they musta done it more times?

love your other stories, 2!

Would have given a 100 rating if the birth control hadn't been so politically correct. Hell she didn't hardly date, parents kept her under control, and then he has mom putting her little virgin on BC. Shame the story couldn't be revised. Liked story, except for BC! Maybe I'll make the rating a 95.

excellent story, I like it very much !!!!!!!!!!!!

Great writing, great story, nice details, all you need is a few properly placed question marks and you are awesome!

An excellent story hindered only by a few small punctuation glitches, but the story's so good it's not worth worrying about. Not bad at all!

Deliberately misspelling words to add emphasis has got to be one of my biggest pet peeves as far as writing goes. Authors have the option of italics and bold print in HTML tags, yet several chose to overload their spellcheck programs with tripe like this. It just kills the mood to see line after line of 5 word sentences that take up 15 character spaces. Your writing is too good to cheapen with these shoddy shortcuts. Please don't do it again.

Definetly one of my favorites. Other than the "ooooh goooooood" kind of stuff I certainly enjoyed it. The story is wonderful. Keep up the good work.<br><br>☼ JD

I have to say I love this story because this is kind of how I lost my virginity. It was stormy, and I was with a really good friend, who turned to an even better friend after that night LOL.

I really liked this story! It was romantic, sweet, and all things cute n sexy. I also like that it sounded realistic, like it's something that actually could happen the way it did. And when I lose my virginity to my boyfriend, I hope he's a sweet as Jake was. Great job!!!

Oh, Baby! This a GREAT, GREAT story! The sex begins with sweet, well-founded romance -- and then SUPER SEX hotter than a firecracker -- and then a sweet and gentle ending in the slumber of smiling love. I adore the whole thing.

definitly got me HOT HOT HOTTT!!!!

I'm almost wondering who was taking notes on my first time. Right down to having gone on the Pill at age 16, but it was for regulation in my case. And yes, I'd hardly dated and had been pretty darned sheltered my whole life. It almost sounds cliche', I know, but I felt like I was reading my own life with this one. And it got me hot. ;-D I know I'll never be scared of thunderstorms ever again. Tornadoes, either.

tht was like the best story ever it made me so excited n i luv all ur stories!!!