All Comments on 'A Dark Awaking'

This is erotic?

shit

A very strange little tale, and yes, Witton, it is erotic. No, Anon, it isn't shit. It's an examination of a specific lifestyle that you may disagree with but is the bases for thousands or hundreds of thousands of erotic stories. The story is well-constructed, the pacing is great, and the story is presented interestingly.

Very good way with words. I would be happy in a relationship like that.

The surrender of a good white wife to a stronger Blackman as her husband watches is hot. The raw sexual power he has over her as he shares her with his friends is the start of her new addiction for her.

I can feel the queasiness in my stomach imagining it’s my wife that’s eagerly sucking the strangers black cocks as I listen to them laugh at the new white whore. Knowing all the fight has gone out of me as I see her excitement, knowing she won’t stop after today.

Not my thing, but if it were I can tell it would work beautifully. Let's here it for "simple erotica!"

The Awaking? Should have been The Awakening. Rhematic, should have read as Rheumatic. What happened to proof readers? Not a good story, but could have been improved by careful thought and a good dictionary.