All Comments on 'A Date at the Beach'

A bunch unbelievable (just picked-up & left work?), some boilerplate.

Hi everyone,

So this is my first time posting and I don't know the exact literotica etiquette for responding to feedback messages so I thought I would just post here.

I just wanted to say thank you to everyone for the positive feedback. It's really encouraging and I can't wait until I have time to write another short story.

As to the people giving critique, thank you as well. This was my first time writing erotica and I am always welcome to critique that could help me improve my writing.

Anyways thanks, I look forward to posting my next story!

Really Judy it's a good first effort. Do write more. Do properly categorize your stories and you will get better ratings and comments. Romance around here should have a strong element of LOVE, whether early or long term. If it's just one on one sex with consent, then it is Erotic Couplings. I'll bet you can write a great Romance too!