All Comments on 'A Date with Molly and Brian'

So this is my first story and I hope you like it! Please let me know what you think and if you like the themes in this story. I'll start working on the next one!

I thought your story was very hot. I don't always like the technical details of two guys going at it together, when written in an erotic story, but in this case it works well. It would be hard to tell this without them to be honest. The flow was good, not too slow or fast, and the characters were human feeling and not "set pieces," which I also like. I like a man in chastity too, having my guy in chastity for a bit, (at least a week) causes a serious change in his psyche, he becomes very agreeable to pretty much almost anything I can dream up. If it were my story, (which it isn't) I might have tried to explain a bit more about this caged mindset in a man, but perhaps in your next story you could explore this? I am of course assuming that most guys perform/behave like mine does when locked up for long enough, and maybe this isn't the case.

In any event, thanks for sharing your wonderful story, a most impressive first story on literotica, Jackie.

Great story and well written!

The story hits the right note in a kinky way. On the one hand the perfect dirty talk but on the other hand the right amount of kindness. In my opinion not many stories are well balanced but you did it very well.

Also in your story its not just cuck and wife/girlfriend like in most others. Its cuck of another couple. I like that way because there are too few stories like this. Or like cuck and roommate/crush/step-sister/one-night-stand. Just a few ideas for a upcoming story. And I personally also like the chastity part very much.

Well the question is if there will be a sequal to that story? It works well as a stand-alone but I think there is also much stuff left for a new part.

Kind regards

(English is not my native language, so sorry for some mistakes)

Great story!!!!!

Great story. Maybe she'll be changing the lock?

loved it please write another chapter..