by Rob_mDear
Very good stuff, Rob. The feel of this story is a much different thing than the other renditions. Of course, how much of that is my perception and expectation, and how much is your work? As for "Sad", Anonymous, how so? The author explicitly stated what he was doing - adapting the same general story to different situations. It's not like -some- authors who do so without so stating (a.k.a. plagiarism). Rob was honest, so I don't feel that you're justified in "dinging" him for doing what he said he was going to do. You're entitled to your opinion, of course, but that's like someone who's repulsed by the very idea choosing to read the *whole* story and then commenting on how repulsive it is. :P
I loved your flawless detail of every sensation and can only say that those who find your work boring should just look into the gay stories .
a wonderful climax (no pun intended) to a wonderful built-up story, Rob. I look forward to reading future stories from you.
*frowns at "Sad"* why hide behind an anonymous name and still have the audacity to comment? *shakes my head* no doubt a little kid.
I just had to say that I could not stop reading the whole series, and I am left wanting more. Do keep writing as I enjoy your style and was completly engaged. Thank you.
The scene of Amy bound to the table with pantyhose was itself worth the price of admission.
I got off three times while reading the amazing perfect trilogy. it was wow! oh my gosh wow. I don't picture my dad in these though. I picture my boyfriend as my "daddy", and it makes the story so much more erotic for me. these stories make me want to dive head first into role playing. thank you! for opening up a new chapter in my sex life. i totally owe you that.
This series was so hot it could easily start a fire. Your sex scene was one of the best I have read. I loved the slow build up.
Superb prose; excellent presentation. Very, very sexual.
A perfect daddy/daughter incest story...I would want to own my daughter just like this...Thanks for writing
Wow this one for the books. So awesome and you did a good job of dragging
it out . You took the story expertly through to the end . What a great finish .
I loved it .