by Sean Renaud
Is that your entire vocabulary? You cowards who hide in anonymity and hurl poisonous commentary over the wall just piss me off. This was not the strongest story or the best writing I have seen, but it certainly did not deserve that kind of a comment. Join Lit and try your own hand at writing. Then see how you like the Anonymous comments.
This was a pretty good entry. I loved the twist at the end. Keep up with working on your writing, you sound like you have talent.
Fucking Rodent!
Fucking Retarded Rodent!
Readable, but not something you'd write home about. There are a lot worse stories doing the rounds.
Unfortunately the internet allows anyone to comment, hence some really moronic stuff inevitably turns up. Whether it is labelled 'Anonymous' or not is largely irrelevent. Let's face it, I doubt a name like 'Hampster' shows on a birth certificate!
Hello form Greece! Very lovely story! Love is a great thing. A great part of love is to forgive.... :)