All Comments on 'A Day at the Beach Pt. 01'

by Lenasnow

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

unrealistic and nothing of substance for your story attempt.

JohnnyC651JohnnyC6517 months ago

Can’t wait for chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

well done...easy to imagine ones self there..5 stars

TMforfun2016TMforfun20167 months ago

Love it... perfect stranger and exhibitionist fantasy - always love being watched!

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