All Comments on 'A Day at the Office'

using they/their as pronouns for she/her for Gaby was very distracting and annoying. I guess for me, they and their are always plural and it is just jarring to be used as singular.

Until near the end I wondered if they/Gaby was their/Gabriel's nickname. (Confusing, isn't it.)

Still, four stars.

How refreshing to read some hot tasty lit with a modern flair. Love the pronouns and lgbt flow and sex positive culture!

love the casual usage of pronouns and the fun, lighthearted worldbuilding! five stars from me.

I love your stories! Free use is so often written as a one sided straight man focused genre and you do away with that. I love the concept of the earrings and that everyone is interested in propositioning others. Also love to see they them pronouns used casually.

Super hot? Check.

Inclusive as fuck? Check.

Best free use on this site? Check.

I need more of this world

fucking awesome. I'd be overjoyed if you wrote more stories in this series. Thanks for sharing

I agree with the last anom's comment. The woke pronouns used for Gaby is distracting. - 1 star.

There is no coherent story line, just a random selection of erotic events whiched could have been weaved together in a different order. - 1 star.

You do however create an interesting future fantasy land in this unusual/fresh style + 1 star.

An interesting short read with lots of action.

@Stoere_Boer "Woke" is not an adjective, and if Gaby chooses to use non-binary pronouns, that's their concern, not yours.

interesting concept! Thank You!

I love this story and all the other in this world!