All Comments on 'A Day in the Life Ch. 01'
by WifeWatchman
- 9 Comments
Anonymousover 8 years agoThan you again for another excellent beginning of the case. Hope you and all have a GREAT and HAPPY Holidays..
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Pairadoxover 8 years agoAlthough this one is almost too blatant, esp. with those chemicals - which makes me wonder if that's not intentional. Hmmmmm.... :-)
Anonymousover 8 years agoA transvestite who makes out with a Latino gang banger in front of his crew...
A list filled with a litany of cosmetic bases, outraged testosterone laden Macho fury on cam...removal of the offending organs....and no, I'm not claiming any more intelligence than the average shmoe who reads these tidbits
That's why I'm so surprised that it is so obvious
Still a good story
I know, free site notwithstanding, you must be battling the holiday rush trying to let one this obvious slip past...lol
Honest, we're willing to wait for the suspense to build because we enjoy your stories and truly appreciate your efforts
Happy Holidays
Anonymousover 8 years agopipeline for chemicals, from California, for superior bloodlines, to use in race wars, is what it sounds like to me. the victim was a mole, for the CIA, or FBI, and exposed, so he got terminated,. by the gang. and of course, the shadow man, is involved too..along with Thomas P. Cook. by; eg34904@gmail.com
LeFrog08over 8 years agoBut I have to agree, a bit obvious....the victim was a transvestite, mix in some latin machismo, and there's the case....
Happy Holidays to all!
Anonymousover 8 years agoof LIt can't write a story,. Gave it a 5
Maonaighalmost 2 years agoI'm enjoying the story and mean to go straight on to the next part. However, there was one point which struck me as being a little implausible. Would the Commander really have taken would-be journalists Alison and Chris onto the crime scene to view the body? They are 18-year old students who may never have seen a peaceful death, let alone a violent one where the body has been mutilated. Wouldn't there be a danger that one or both might throw up or pass out or otherwise pollute and contaminate the crime scene? Just a thought.
chytown12 months ago*****Good read will wait for the commander to solve the case. Thanks for sharing.
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