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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
You need an editor

Buddy, I'm from India too so don't take this in the wrong way; a good idea for a story does not always translate into a good story. While the concept was good, the story was loaded with cliches (eagle eyes, anyone?) and grammatical errors- just too, too many of them. All of this sank what might have been a good read.

Think about getting a good editor the next time around, eh?

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