All Comments on 'A Day without Internet'

Congratulations on your first story. I thourghly enjoyed it and look forward to chapter ll. It was hard not to envision you as the mother.

A New Fan

Ron

Story felt too erratic and unrealistic. Feel it would have benefitted from the family slowly falling into Incest like they couldn't resist and the boredom and feelings just boil over but for 1st story not bad!

Very nice! Hope to see a next chapter for this one! So many dirty possibilities for this story.

In order to do as you ask, that is, ignore your bad writing, one would have to not read any of it.

Was great you need a part 2 though!!

hate parental sex with offspring - gross

A strange story, but fun. Maybe daddy can be persuaded to abandon his reservations?

Great story. You're writing style is fantastic. Would love to see a part two

So this was kind of weird. You refer the family as being nudists more than once, but they wear clothing the entire time?

Love the story, I enjoyed that it felt light-hearted compared to some of the more intense stories on here. I didn't even notice that english isn't your first language, fuck the haters.

So brave, commenting anonymously, informing us that you hate parental sex with offspring (WTF are you even here), which only makes it obvious you didn’t even read it!

Loved the story. Quirky and fun!

Fun, sexy story. I enjoyed it. Please, please write more.

Liked the story hope mo follows

A bit tedious. Perhaps it would have been better if they were either actually nudists or alternatively, very private. As it is, there is little build-up and no great erotically charged moments. If the daughter always masturbates with the door open, then this is nothing new to the family. Same with the son. And the other daughter seems to have an easily visible buttplug always in. Meanwhile the mother is keen for sone action. So with all of this, its only a matter of time before they all have sex. So there is no sexual tension. I also couldnt see why characters were doing whatever they did. How did it add to the story to have the son mend a chair (and with duct tape!)? Why did the younger daughter walk about listening to loud music? It was a bit like watching non-playable charcters milling about pointlessly in a game. It also suffered from the lack of an editor. Too many quirky expressions to ignore. Who has pancakes for dinner?

I thought it was clever and fun and turned me on. Don’t worry about the haters.

It was really good but I’d love them to all wank themselves and each other and some fucking.

Needs a part 2