All Comments on 'A Deal with Grandpa'

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 2 years ago

Loved it! Can't wait to see what happens next! Five stars and a favorite point!

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearalmost 2 years ago

Nice little tale,

Always enjoy your work. Even for a quick tale you made this exciting and still put enough into it that I'd like to read more about these four. Never read a grampa harem story, never even thought about it... till now anyway. I gather this is supposed to be a one-off but if you decide to write more I'll welcome it. Thanks for Sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Dumb boring rushed

bare5747bare5747almost 2 years ago

nice story and I loved the fact that the family helped each other especially since they all wanted and got what they wanted in life.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

"I want her to pay her own way." She isn't paying, she is prostituting herself and it is highly illegal. lol

None the less seems like a nice tale. Thanks for sharing it.

oldsage_1oldsage_1almost 2 years ago

And DocWords operates his magic again! Great little fantasy especially for us Grandpas! Thanks for writing and for sharing.

Cheers

SAGE

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 1 year ago

Had to come back and reread this one after reading the prequel. Please keep us informer of future escapades of this naughty foursome.

Cheers

SAGE

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 1 year ago

Fun story. My kinda family!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice. 5. More please. Make Grandpa very happy and very tired. Thanks.

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 1 year ago

They sound like pretty girls, they also sound pretty experienced for eighteen year olds so soon after their birthdays, I should hate to think my granddaughters were having sex before their eighteenth birthday.

Gym52Gym52about 1 year ago

An extremely interesting premise, that has been well developed.

TransguycharlieTransguycharlieabout 1 year ago

I couldn’t stop playing with myself over this. I fucking love incest stories. My grandad used to show me his dick and I repayed the favour. Never went further than mutual masturbation though. Loved the story, I’m rock hard

Dan2play69Dan2play6911 months ago

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

TransguycharlieTransguycharlie11 months ago

Came back after reading the first story. It’s got me close to cumming again

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Definitely very sexy erotica. Every thing is by consent/open contract. No need for a second chapter a conclusion has been reached, unless a 5 party gets involved, witch is improbable.

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