by lambier
I still can't grasp this concept of sharing or swapping partners. I mean if a person wants to have sex with others why get married at all. Why not just go find a whore as live-in partner? Separation won't be as messy as divorce, cheating won't be as horrible and. the fornicating couple won't slander the divine intention of marriage. I and many of my country men think sharing the spouse is stupid.
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No I didn't read all just half if page one then jumped to last paragraph.
You have a great imagination and potential. But you need to proof read your work. So many errors and sections are poorly written. I also didn’t feel connected to the characters. It was more about the sex than the characters. 3*
Excellent story, something new, and excellent writing. Looking forward to more in the future. Five stars from me.
I have been there. Watching my wife getting fucked, and her Watching me. Both of us got a lot of pleasure out of watching our partners getting taken
Well written. But where did you go? We the readers need a lot more of your stories! At least a part 2 and 3 to this one.