All Comments on 'A Demon Scorned Ch. 04'

Yeah... That makes sense. Good for him though. Its nice when the pleasantness is something you weren't expecting. Even better when you've deserved it.

Magic binding cuffs. They are either 100% effective, or they are only effective against most, with the cleverest of wizards able to finagle their way out.

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I have been waiting since the first chapter to see Saban open the locket. Thanks so much for writing such amazing stories and sharing them with us! <3

I’ve been waiting for Saban to open the locket!! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!

I love the story! Finally the locket was opened! I do however wish runt had followed Saban into the human world.

Anita is acting like she never seen an attractive female demon but you had one it the previous story. Also they're shapedshifters so why would she be surprised and anything it chose to look like? Saban is supposed to be ridiculously handsome if i recall. Your description of it was overdoing it as well. Something simple like "she was inhumanly beautiful" would have gotten the point across. Brevity is the soul of wit.