All Comments on 'A Demon's Devotion Ch. 04'

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TSreaderTSreaderover 2 years ago

A very interesting chapter, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I am really enjoying this story! Love the premise and the characters. Thanks very much for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Je sais pas pourquoi mais TOUTE tes histoire m'excite de ouf et je suis cette série là aussi attentivement que vox dominus (ma préféré de tout se que j'ai lut jusque là) j'attends la suite avec impatience

Pour la suite j'aimerai qu'à un moment elle demande sa récompense du chapitre 3 qu'elle a refuser de prendre. Et surtout qu'il la puinisse quand même pour toute ces rébellion très offensant et inapte pour sa situation d'esclave.

5/5

CreeperclawCreeperclawover 2 years ago

Huh, you just made me really curious about a demon's home life. Something that only the show Lucifer has made me ponder before. Still though, he cooks for her and he looks out for her academic interests? Definitely not a selfish master which is odd given previous chapters.

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 1 year ago

Similar thoughts to Creeperclaws comments below, plus the why the demons lack of power, did I miss something earlier in the story. I suppose it will all come out in the end.. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

At this point, who is possessing whom? A provocative question. Clearly, the human form of Levi is limiting the demon.

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